the5thlineproject

Day 243 August 31

In 5th line on August 31, 2009 at 10:50 pm

“We’ve spent so much time at this park that it should almost be named after our family.”~~Spud by Patricia Orvis

The summer of 1995 is remembered for the extreme heat wave that hovered over the Chicago area. It’s also the summer Jackson learns some tough lessons about life and love.

Cluttered exposition slows the tempo of what has the potential to be a good story.

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